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OK, this photo does show the hair better (since you have more light, so the camera isn't struggling so hard). The one thing that would have helped it would have been to give her body a slightly more dynamic stance, so that the motion in the hair would have been more consistent.
That might be something to try -- make a *really* minimal figure, maybe even skip the details of the face, but work in the way the arms and legs and the twist of the torso show a body in motion. I've got a couple of pieces that are far from perfect, but at least illustrate the idea I'm trying to get at:
You've got a great human form, and this model shows really good work on the muscles. Now imagine that character in motion!
(Oh, and I love the bandages. Like the "dirt and blood" on the previous piece, this starts to make the character more gritty and "real".)